Jonny 5′s Rhyme of the Day 6-29-10 „Wheeze in the nose“
(pt 180 of 365) 6 – Word Wednesday (Batman, lillies, string theory, famine, penguins, pistol shrimp) At 8pm I thought I’d do a quick 3ww and go to bed in order to wake up early and work on the mixtape before the band meeting. But 4 hours later I found that wasn’t the plan. These fast raps are harder to make smooth the first night, but I like this one. PS. Halfway there! Beat: www.youtube.com Lyrics: I’m tired gotta sit down so much workflow I could just drown but the water is brown so I gotta get on top of it now sheesh it’s a mess man stand up on it like I’m just tryin do my best jesus impression preaching with Stephen make em raise hands when I teach’em a lesson capice any questions and it seemed like an decent investment the year we bought it but where’s BP on the periodic I thought it was natural for peers to profit now prophets appear on the peers to stop it gotta get clean this is clearly toxic put this hear in your ears inside a ya head and nod it yep we got it on the nose like not it wheeze in the nose like asthma daze inadate with disaster use matter in NE state like plasma NE state like Nebraska so the tasks at hand make applicants into applicans put trash in the trashcans put dapper dans into afro am while I rap for the tascam fhfh and put tracts of land in line so that all that we lack is famine high n dry n mighty fine like a sack of clementines oh my darling analyze we know that the phantoms lie pantomime another path brining back atlantis we’re in deep …
@flobot5 thks I guess…don’t know what that is.
@nateggs ok …I wasn’t sure thanks
@rookis25 Actually Eric Bana played the Hulk (then Edward Norton), not Bale though. I think it was just a slip of last names.
how about a rhyme about the horrible police action in toronto over the past weekend?
@flobot5 I was wondering about that, this is an amazing rhyme. I love the fast ones.
@flobot5 well now I feel bad haha. I wasn’t calling you out on it I thought there was a meaning I wasn’t getting. Don’t sweat it though I say the wrong thing all the time.
Oops. I meant Bruce Wayne. Some comic fan I am. But thanks to rookis for the no-prize, if any of you remember those!
@davefrye86 Cristian Bale played Incredible Hulk b4 he played batman…….I think, thats just how I took it
till i collapse awsome choice!!!!!!!!!!!! johnny!!!
Another epic rhyme
Awesome work Jonny. Been waiting for more like these.
Till I Collapse, I love it! But doing a Rhyme Of The Day over it just makes the song 10x better. As for the Nebraska line, there isn’t NE state like it! I also think you should use Nick’s suggestion- it would be interesting.
equality wednesday… undivided attention, individual or sin goal?
I don’t understand the The Incredible Hulk reference.
Till i collapse I’m workin all day, not sellin that crack, not sellin my soul, not sellin shyt, so don’t buy it , it’s whack, I’ll buy it myself, it“s mine so fukit i’m buyin it back, I don’t rely on these tracks,I rely on job , so I rely on my back, rely on my mind and rely on the facts……could write more but gotta go to work!
yeah i definitely like nicks idea where you could rap from both points of view, maybe from an ordinary citizen of america’s point of view from 9/11 then from a citizen of iraq’s point of view and how each one feels about the attack (the american feels pissed and wants to get revenge on every middle eastern and the iraqi feels scared knowing hes caught in the crossfire)
well i was thinkin somethin along the lines of.. both sides of 9/11 i dont really know how to explain it but kind of why they thought they shouldve carried out the attacks and what bush did to them to make them think they had to and why they dont like our freedoms i dont know its 3 my time and im tired i thought of this a couple days ago -your fan nick
@NickisElite Sure, you can just put a comment here! The simpler the idea the more likely I am to use it.
Also, a lot of people ask me to perform rhymes that they’ve written but I don’t do that. I always tell people they should just perform their own rap, since that’s sort of the point!
What’s you idea?
great rhyme andhey i got a great rhyme idea can i just send you a message on youtube?